by huh.xo
Thu Jul 12, 2012 10:12 pm
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2nd Email
3rd Email.[u]
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Thanks for your interest. I appreciate that you contacted me!
How's your day?
My name is Danny Walmsley and I'm the owner of the apartment, I love this apartment and it means a lot to me! I attached a few pictures of it, therefore check the attached file.
It has just been renovated - the apartment looks exactly like in the pictures, with 2 parking spots - totally finished, fully furnished and I have the option of sending all my furniture into storage if you want to bring your own, no extra costs. It is unoccupied, clean, quiet, has all the facilities and the utilities: Washing machine... Dishwasher... Dryer... Refrigerator... Stove... Oven... Juice Machine... Iron... Toaster... Coffee Maker... Microwave... Vacuum cleaner. It is very close, in walking distance to local transport, close to school, restaurants, and shopping, with very quiet neighbors and safe area.
The rent for 1 month is $850.00 (for the whole apartment). The lease is flexible, can be month to month, min stay 3 months, max 7 years. The price will not increase monthly, it will remain the same for the whole period that the contract will be signed for.
The all utilities are included in this price (rent/month). No extra fees! It means water... sewer... trash... electricity... gas... cable and Internet. Don't miss out on this opportunity! I think $850.00 is a good deal.
Anyway, you must understand, I'm not looking to make a business or a profit with it, I just want to find the proper tenant, someone who will treat and care my apartment like it was his own.
If you are really interested in this apartment, I want this rental to be as smooth as possible, I really need to take care of this matter by the end of the next week.
I look forward to hearing from you soon and I will send you more details.
Respectfully,
Danny Walmsley
2nd Email
This beautiful apartment is located in a lovely area ( W Cordova St Downtown, Vancouver ), excellent location! The apartment is full furnished, everything is new inside, so please understand me! Due to the high fraud and fake apartments posted I am very cautious and will not give you this information over email.
You know that the apartment is not inhabited.
Please do not get me wrong!
First of all, if you allow me, I would like to know some details about yourself. It is important to me, I need a serious and trustworthy person who not only will pay me the rent on time but also will take care and preserve my property. The apartment has been renovated, so please, I will solicit for absolute maintenance of this apartment!
Please describe yourself so I can have an idea about you and the people that will be living in my apartment.
Example :
Your full name .............
Phone number .............
How old are you .............
Are you married .............
Occupation .............
How many people will be living in the apartment .............
Do you have a pet .............
The date you will like to move into my apartment .............
How long do you want to stay in my house .............
Reason for moving out of current home .............
Send me an e-mail with the information I requested... I have a lot of interested customers and I will select a candidate out of the e-mails that I will receive.
Thank you for your kindness and understanding!
Respectfully,
Danny
3rd Email.[u]
You have a nice profile!
If you allow me, now I would like to tell you a little bit about me and my family. I want to give you some insight into who I am.
I am currently 43 years old and married. My wife's name is Rahel and have one daughter that is 4 years old. I work hard for my family. I am very career focused and will be spending a lot of my time at the office. I'm a mature individual, very sincere, respectable and love friending new people. I am a caring person who believes in taking good care of things.
I resided in this apartment with my family, I lived in it for over 4 years, loved every day of it, until last month when I got the opportunity to open a franchise ( a small business ) in London, England. We've tried to develop a family business but unfortunately the things didn't work the way we've expected and now I am at one step from losing my market.
I had all my family moved here for 6 years. I want to start a new life, in 6/7 years I will decide if I will keep it, and get back in town or if I will sell it and move forever in England, you never know!
This is the second time I tried to rent the apartment... I had a deal with somebody before who said he will rent the apartment if I come back... So I got a plane ticket, and guess what? When I arrived there, he didn't show up and after 2 days he gave me a call and said that he is sorry but he can't rent it anymore... How do I know if you have enough money?!
So don't get me wrong and don't take it personally, but now I don't want to buy another plane ticket to come and fall for it once more... maybe you won't show up. I'm sick of tire-kickers, people who are just looking around and not serious about renting, so please don't waste my time! No offence!
You can have the keys in hand in less than 48 hours. I have found a way to complete the deal safe and fast for the two of us. This is a 100% safe method! You will have the chance to inspect it before final decision. You will see it and decide if you will stay in the house or not before I receive the payment.
If you are interested in it mail me back and I am sure that we will find a good way to conduct this deal.
Respectfully,
Danny
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